 Posted 7/19/2007 11:30:23 AM
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Posted 7/25/2007 9:13:00 AM
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| Hello, When I read your ad the first thing that I noticed was the word Negotiable in the first line. That immediately told me that you are a desparate seller. However, you used some words that I would want to read such as beutiful etc...These are positive words. Then towards the end of your ad you state this is a must see another statement that tells of your desperation. When I see ads like this I have a tendancy to think that there is something wrong with the house. The negative words stayed with me. To change your ad I would maybe say something like BEAUTIFUL HOME IN ..... Then in the description add all the special things about your home. Does it have a fabulous kitchen how about a master bedroom or bath. Or maybe it has been professionally landscaped. Does it have any water features etc.....Then end your ad with something like all of this for the $$$. Put the price at the end of your ad so people can read all the great things before getting to the price. Hope this helps. EBW
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Posted 8/26/2007 6:29:21 PM
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Thanks I made those changes.
www.myjafra.com/pmartinez1
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Posted 3/13/2008 9:15:14 PM
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WOW, less than 50 bucks per foot for a home built in 1999? I am confused.
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